Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Escanyo, Dumaguete
March 14 2007
2:00 AM

dedicated to: Linwell, Marcus (a new friend) and my craziness

Luna

with three soul running
this vast desert of loneliness
all we could feel is emptiness
--- deep and real
but to see this one great masterpiece
as it signals the darkness sweet embrace
yet always sealed with one true kiss
as it gives spark to this deep blue fountain of life
as it caresses the feeling of pain
making us feel stupid and insane

o luna
after this exchange of mixture
--- traitor but adds us to our soul
we end up wasted and noisy
silent? shhhh
wanting to go to slumber
feel the sweet angels flying in the heaven's sky
but as we open our sight
as we take the next step in this roller coaster ride

we remember the moon
as the only witness in all acts
--- naughty or not

even for a moment
luna you made me feel blue
wanting not to stop
this interaction
this one night affair
the time
--- as it runs so fast
wait!

still we believe you will keep quiet
as we share this cup
make it a symbol
of love that is just a blaff

moon come and visit me once more
in my dream lagoon...

3 comments:

lyde said...

it is poetry's magic to weave dreams and realities that is very close to the human heart. we write poems because we want ours dreams and realities to be one and offer it to others with great desire and happiness. i'm glad you have this. continue writing...

Bullfrog said...

whoa. now i am really impressed with your mind's scope claudio. only a few can handle poetry naturally like the way you do, and i'm very proud of it.

why haven't you submitted anything for the sillimanian magazine?

Grand Pirouettes said...

WOW. HAVING YOUR COMMENTS MAKE ME FEEL great for you two are poets, respected and candidates for the national artsist category. mga buang man gud mo... thanks bitaw... well im just exploring my pen if it still works... and with your comments i think it does.... and so i will write more... depende sa mood... hahaha

bitaw kakaiba ang feeling getting your views.. the FROG and The Queen of Poetry